Discovering Character Motivation

How you choose to overcome them is what(1)

Plot – the things that happen to your character.

Motivation – why/how they choose to deal with the roadblocks in front of them.

I wrote a book. One hundred thousand beautiful words made it into my manuscript and I can tell you I was SO PROUD when I finally wrote THE END!!! I started what is essentially a marathon and made it all the way to the finish line.

Ahh those heady days of success. I was so chuffed with my work I packaged it up, wrote a fabulous cover letter and sent it out to a selected group of agents and publishers whom I was sure would fall over themselves to sign me up for a three book deal immediately.

I bet you can guess what happened next.

Yep, I got rejected. Oh let me count the ways I got rejected.

Most of them were one line copy and pasted responses like, “this isn’t what we are currently looking for…”, “thanks but no thanks” and “was that you standing outside my window and going through my garbage?”

It was a pretty low point in my fledgling writing career and of course I reacted badly. I ranted about how the world was unfair and cruel. How could I have poured so much of myself into something and have it rejected? Clearly agents couldn’t see talent even it bit them on the ass.

It went on for a while folks. Not my proudest moment.

And then something interesting happened. I received another rejection but this time the kind agent who had taken the time to point out a few of the reasons why they liked my idea but couldn’t consider taking it on as it was. The major factor being that, in their point of view, the heroine lacked motivation.

At first I was appalled. How dare they suggest that I had left out such an important device from my masterpiece. But then I read it again. And you know what? I had my character roaming around the countryside, meeting interesting people, falling in love and solving problems but nowhere, from beginning to end, did it clearly show her motivation. There was no explanation for why she did the things she did or how those choices ultimately made her grow as a person through my rambling tale.

It was a tough lesson but one well learned.

In many ways motivation seems obvious. Surely it is implied. For example if you are writing a story about a character who is tying their shoe laces then they must be going for a walk right? Maybe. Or maybe not. What if your hero likes to wear shoes at all times because he stepped on snail when he was six and he now lives in constant fear of doing it again.

Just because a character is doing something does’t mean it is obvious to the reader why.

So here are my tips for helping you discover your character’s motivation.

Ask yourself why

This might seem like a strange idea to some people but if you are going to commit to the thousand hours it takes to write a book, not even edit it just write the thing, then why do you want to tell the story of this character? Why should your audience care what happens to them? Who is this person going to become because of their journey?

Create a status quo

Every good character needs to start somewhere. Harry Potter was stuck living in a cupboard, Elizabeth Bennett needed to find a husband and Katniss was born into a world that was unjust. As a reader we need to understand where the hero or heroine comes from before we give them the plot point that drives them to leave or change the world they have always known.

Interview your character

Whether it is over a cup of tea or in a dark room with a bright light shining in their eyes, imagine sitting across from your hero and asking him some questions about himself. Find out why he does things the way he does and what his reactions would be to a given situation.

Use a motivation generator have this awesome Motivation Generator. It is a really fun way to spend 1o minuets and get some great ideas at the same time.

If you have any great ideas about discovering a characters motivation or anecdotes about your own writing share them in the comments below. 

Social Media 101 – a guest post for Verandah Magazine

I am very excited to let you all know that this week my first column for Verandah Magazine went live!

The lovely folk over at Verandah asked for my take on Social Media, explain what it is and how it works for people who are not necessarily in the know.

To enjoy the full article head over to their gorgeous website –


How to cover a live event with social media


How to cover a live event with social media – Byron Bay Writers Festival: Gearing up for a Social Media Storm.

I feel like the luckiest girl in the world. Don’t let my bird-nest bad hair or manic over caffeinated lip twitch fool you, last week I had the pleasure of covering  social media for the Byron Bay Writers Festival AND IT WAS AMAZING!

I have been working in marketing and social media for many years but I have only ever covered one other live event. Unlike my normal routine of carefully selected or crafted pieces of content, the three days of the writers festival were bananas. A heady mix of rushing between different tents across the festival site, listening to and distilling lectures into 140 characters and taking so many  pictures. It really  was an incredible experience, one which I hope I get to relive again next year,  and I definitely learnt a lot. So below are a few things I picked up from my own experience that you might find useful for your next live event.


My advice:

1. Know your goal.

Are you trying to increase followers, create hype or provide timely newsworthy content? Maybe all three.

Speak to your client and get a clear sense of what they want from your efforts. Find out how many different platforms shall you be working across, where do they want you to focus most of you attention and what are their KPIs.

You can spend all the time in the world creating brilliant content but if you are not delivering on the clients specific needs you are wasting everyone’s time.

2. Be prepared.

Lots of little things can get in the way of you providing consistent high quality coverage for your chosen event. Some things you might need to know are: will you have regular internet on site? Somewhere to charge your computer/device? Are you working outside? What is the weather forecast? Are you managing a team or working alone? Can you prepare content ahead of time?

Just by asking a few simple questions I was able to adequately prepare myself for the challenges I was going to face. I also found that by having a clear list of the events I absolutely needed to cover, all of my official accounts set up and logged in on the night before and a map of the event site I could pretty much handle anything. Plus it gave me three less things to worry about on the day!


3. Take s survival kit.

I’m not much of a survivalist, you only have to watch two seconds of Doomsday Peepers to see that, but a survival kit could save your ass. Depending on your role you could be so busy rushing between different parts of the event that you might not have time to think, let alone eat or drink. Having a small bag on you with a few items can give you the chance to sit through a particularly long session or whole event without having to miss any important details.

My perfect survival kit includes:

Water bottle
Device- computer/smart phone/ tablet (I used an iPad and it was the perfect size and weight for me.)
Apple (fruit not a computer)

4. Finally HAVE FUN!

Yes yes, the quaint reminder to enjoy yourself at the end of the post. Clichéd sure but still true. Regardless of whether you are being paid or volunteering your time this is your chance to kick some butt and show the world what you can do. And if you are volunteering this opportunity could be the boost you need to get a professional gig playing with the social media we all know and love.

Good luck and let’s us know your tips below in the comments.